Name:Shadow Age:5000 Gender:Male Race:Dragon Birthplace:Dragon Lair Skill:Strength/Fire Magic/Flying/Unarmed Combat/Agility
Biography:The dragon was once the ruler of all locations until a much greater force came and took them over. So now there is very few dragons.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral Favored Enemy: Favored Weapon: Deity: Aaron Current Task:Don't have one
Physical:Black Eyes 1000pnd. 8ft.
Weapon:Very Dull Claws Armor:Weak Dragon Scales
Stength:5/10 Fire Magic:4/10 Flying:1/10 Combat:3/10 Agility:4/10
Last edited by Baddog5949 on Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:48 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Subject: Re: Shadow Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:20 pm
Baddog5949 wrote:
Picture:
Name:Shadow Age:5000 Gender:Male Race:Dragon Birthplace:Dragon Lair Skill:Strength/Fire Magic/Flying/Unarmed Combat/Agility
Biography:Been around for more then 5000 years. Use to own the whole land untill more races came and killed most of them now there are only few dragons.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral Favored Enemy: Favored Weapon: Deity: Aaron Current Task:Don't have one
Physical:Black Eyes/1000pwn./8ft.
Disapproved. 1. What are your skills? 2. Better bio please. 3. Make a better layout.
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Subject: Re: Shadow Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:29 pm
Baddog5949 wrote:
Picture:
Name:Shadow Age:5000 Gender:Male Race:Dragon Birthplace:Dragon Lair Skill:Strength/Fire Magic/Flying/Unarmed Combat/Agility
Biography:Been around for more then 5000 years. Use to own the whole land untill more races came and killed most of them now there are only few dragons.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral Favored Enemy: Favored Weapon: Deity: Aaron Current Task:Don't have one
Physical:Black Eyes/1000pwn./8ft.
Stength:5/10 Fire Magic:4/10 Flying:1/10 Combat:3/10 Agility:4/10
Check your spelling and better bio please.
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Subject: Approved Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:41 pm
Good job.
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Subject: Re: Shadow Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:16 pm
I disapprove. Please redo your bio. Also redo your name to more of a rp name.
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Subject: Re: Shadow Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:18 pm
Disregarding Robo-Grammar Nazi, there are a few grammatical mistakes, otherwise, I think it is good.
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Subject: Re: Shadow Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:12 am
Xenbot wrote:
Disregarding Robo-Grammar Nazi, there are a few grammatical mistakes, otherwise, I think it is good.
Subject: Shadow 
Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:17 pm
